Before Adair can leave the kitchen table, the mood, atmosphere, and vibe of what it is to sit at that table must be established. Delineated, nailed down, described accurately and precisely.
On the morning of her departure from Nebraska, Adair is home with her family.
Details must be added.
The proper names of Adair’s parents must be given. Adair’s surname must be given:
Adair’s father is named Jakob. Adair’s mother’s name is Emie. Their surname is Kellstrom. See if I can get a proper accent on that surname: Kellström.
Spam of Human Affection 
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