Telling A Simple Story Plus One

I’m telling this simple story,

A beautiful young woman leaves her loving Nebraska family and community to go to NYC.

Now there is an additional element:

In NYC, the beautiful Nebraskan woman meets another woman, Ghislaine.

This addition is manageable:

A beautiful young woman leaves her loving Nebraska family and community to go to NYC. There, she meets a woman named Ghislaine.

The addition has not proved quirky.

Everything is still straightforward.

The story is still about the beautiful Nebraskan woman, Adair, and her “action adventure” journey, going to NYC.